Last week I shared the opening of The Skeleton Canyon Treasure. Here's more of chapter 1:
He took a step toward her. “OK, I’m looking for someone.”
When Camille Dagneau surprises a strange man in the college machine shop she runs, she is ready for battle. Ryan MacAllister seems equally suspicious of her, but he insists he’s merely looking for his missing uncle, who has disappeared while hunting for a lost treasure. He believes Camie is the key to finding the treasure, and his uncle. But Camie – beautiful, brilliant, and prickly – isn’t about to trust this oversized geologist, or the attraction she feels.
He took a step toward her. “OK, I’m looking for someone.”
“A minute ago you
were looking for me.”
He blew out a
breath. “My uncle. He’s missing and I’m worried something happened to him. The
trail led me here. I wasn’t sure at first which side you were on, and that’s
why I wanted to look around before talking to you. But now that I see you, I
can tell you wouldn’t have had anything to do with his disappearance.” His blue
eyes twinkled, and the confident smile gave him a certain appeal. But if he
thought she’d fall for shallow flattery, he was much mistaken. Even assuming
one could consider it flattering to be told, “You’re probably too harmless to
have kidnapped my uncle.”
She was sure he was
lying about something, and probably about everything. His appearance shortly
after the theft of her invention, a machine that might be worth millions, could
not be a coincidence. One chance in 10,000 maybe. He, or his uncle if he really
had an uncle, had to be connected somehow.
If she could figure
out how, she might get her invention back. Let him keep underestimating her, as
most men did. Camie turned on her own charm. She flashed a smile that had him
blinking as if the light were too bright. “Let’s get that cup of coffee, and
you can tell me about it.” That would get him out of her shop, and into a
public place where it would be easier to get help if needed.
He nodded. “Lead
the way.”
She led the way to
the student center. The spot provided plenty of privacy without the isolation
of her building. She gestured to the man as he sat across from her. “Explain.
You might start with your name.”
“Ah, didn’t we get
to that? I’m Ryan MacAllister.” He grinned. “Age 32. Occupation, mining
geologist. Currently between contract jobs. References available upon request.”
She almost asked to
see a driver’s license and those references. But that could wait. Better to let
him think she trusted everything he said for the moment. “Tell me about your
uncle, Ryan.”
He hesitated, but
this time she didn’t get the impression he was stalling or making up lies.
Rather, he didn’t seem to know how to start. Finally he said, “He’s brilliant.
A genius. But, well, he doesn’t quite fit in with normal society.”
Camie nodded. A few
of her geek friends fit that profile. Some people would say she did as well.
She didn’t consider it a bad thing, since “normal society” tended to suck.
“His hobby is
treasure hunting.”
Camie tensed
slightly, but she thought she hid her reaction well enough. Things were
beginning to make sense.
“He’s always
chasing after some treasure or another, trying to put together clues from old
manuscripts, sort out rumors from facts, and so on. Once in a while, rarely,
he’s actually found something.”
“What has he been
working on lately?”
“The Skeleton Canyon
treasure.” He snapped the phrase and stared at her, as if expecting to surprise
her into some kind of admission. When she simply gazed back, he added, “Heard
of it?”
She shook her head.
Her friend Erin was the expert when it came to history and legend. Camie was in
charge of the technology, and she had wilderness experience that came in handy.
Together they’d found one long-lost treasure several years before and gotten
some fame for their success, but since then they’d done no more than offer
occasional advice on treasure hunting. It wasn’t a vocation, or even a serious
hobby.
He watched her for
several more seconds, eyes narrowed in suspicion, before he went on. “Skeleton
Canyon isn’t too far from here. Southeastern Arizona, near the New Mexico
border. But no one knows where exactly the treasure is, of course. My uncle was
trying to piece together some clues. He kept a journal. A few days ago, I
received the journal in the mail. No explanation except for a note that said to
hold onto it for him.”
She raised an eyebrow. “Wasn’t that the plot of the third Indiana Jones movie?”
She raised an eyebrow. “Wasn’t that the plot of the third Indiana Jones movie?”
The Skeleton Canyon Treasure
When Camille Dagneau surprises a strange man in the college machine shop she runs, she is ready for battle. Ryan MacAllister seems equally suspicious of her, but he insists he’s merely looking for his missing uncle, who has disappeared while hunting for a lost treasure. He believes Camie is the key to finding the treasure, and his uncle. But Camie – beautiful, brilliant, and prickly – isn’t about to trust this oversized geologist, or the attraction she feels.
Following the clues in the missing man’s journal will take
Camie, Ryan, and the cat Tiger on a trail through New Mexico and Arizona.
They’ll visit the Tombstone graveyard at night, uncover clues in museums, and
ultimately wind up in Skeleton Canyon, where rumor says nineteenth-century
cowboy bandits secreted their treasure in a cave. To rescue Ryan’s uncle,
they’ll face steep cliffs, twisty tunnels, and worse dangers in human form, but
trusting each other may be the biggest challenge. And they’re running out of
time ….
If you love suspense and romance, don’t miss this gripping
adventure! The Southwest Treasure Hunters novels include The Mad Monk’s
Treasure and The Dead Man’s Treasure. Each novel stands alone in this series
mixing action and adventure with light romance. I’ve previously
shared part
of the first chapter from The Mad Monk’s Treasure, as well as the opening
and a
later excerpt from The Dead Man’s Treasure.
“The Skeleton Canyon Treasure is a light, breezy
action/adventure/romance that's perfect for summer reading.”
"A great mystery, love story, and search for a
treasure.”
Kris Bock writes novels of suspense and romance
with outdoor adventures and Southwestern landscapes. Whispers in the
Dark features archaeology and intrigue among ancient Southwest
ruins. What We Found is a mystery with strong romantic
elements about a young woman who finds a murder victim in the woods. In Counterfeits,
stolen Rembrandt paintings bring danger to a small New Mexico town.
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Enjoyed the excerpt. Wha is he trying to hide? Loved the reference to Indiana Jones movie.
ReplyDeleteNice excerpt.
ReplyDeleteLOL - love the last line. Tweeted.
ReplyDeleteI like the heroine. Tough and cunning and willing to take advantage of the mistakes of others.
ReplyDelete"Let him keep underestimating her, as most men did."
ReplyDeleteFabulous line. Very appropriate for International Women's Day.
Sounds intriguing! Love the cover!
ReplyDeleteLOL - that's excellent. But is it real or just a fake movie plot? Great hook!
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